Help me with motivation letter ASAP- it is urgent

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Please help me with the motivation letter..specially in the forth paragraph..Any modifications and suggestions will be accepted..This letter answers the following question: "

Please write a clear and detailed description of your academic objectives and the reasons why you wish to pursue them. Discuss your goals both in terms of your field of study in general and within your specific area of specialization. Describe the type of program you wish to pursue and how it relates to your academic and professional background and your objectives for the future. Please keep in mind that the essay will be an essential part of your application for placement into an appropriate program. In your essay do not name specific universities at which you would like to study "

My essay:

Since childhood, I have had a very strong desire for learning everything new. This became a habit of life for me and affected my point of view a lot towards learning as not being just a routine. This habit encouraged me to continually upgrade my academic capabilities. In this regard, getting the master degree is nothing more than one step on my future plan of self-development.

When I was at secondary school, it was the first time I had learned about computers. So, I was very interested in learning so much about computers. My fondness of this science motivated me to join the department of computer and electrical engineering at IUG university fulfill my desire. But during my study, some subjects like internet technology and computer networks attracted my interest. My graduation project was simulations of some cases of computer networks using OPNET. Furthermore, after the completion of my study at the university, I enrolled in Governmental Computer Center and gained CCNA. This step kindled my interest to pursue my education and acquire a deeper theoretical and practical knowledge in a major of computer networks.

"Computer Networks" field is not a random choice. It is a result of profound and long thinking about which field would be the most convenient to my interests, my background, and local society needs. As a developing country, Palestine is in an urgent need for the specialists in many majors and specially IT field to lead the building process. Therefore, getting a master in this field will give me the opportunity to lead several scientific researches that will hopefully contribute to this area of technology.

United States of America is an excellent environment to pursue my education, not only because it is an English speaking country but also one of the most leading countries in IT field in the world. So, I will be close to new discoveries and achievements in my area of specialization and able to learn all I can from abundant scientific resources. On the other hand, getting a master from a multicultural country will boost my cultural experience. As a representative of Palestine, I gained a great experience through my participation in "Reach Out" project which was a regional cultural project organized by British council. It granted me the opportunity to interact with people from different cultures and made me thirsty to know about other cultures.

Finally, I have a strong faith that getting master in this major will be a great benefit for me as it will definitely help in raising my academic background and enhancing my characteristic. It will also be advantageous for the local technological society as it will form an addition to the modern sciences that started to find its way here.
I have had a very strong desire for learning everything new since I was small. This has become a habit and not solely a routine for me in my life that affects my point of view in learning. It serves as a catalyst for me to continually upgrade my academic capabilities. In this regard, getting a master's degree is nothing more than just a step towards my future plan of self-development.

When I was at secondary school, it was the first time I learnt about computers. I was very interested in learning about computers then. I joined the department of computer and electrical engineering at IUG University just to fulfill my desire about everything related to computer. During my study, some subjects like internet technology and computer networks were drawn to me. The final project in the University was the simulations of computer networks with OPNET. After graduation, I enrolled in the Governmental Computer Center and gained CCNA. This step paved the way for me to pursue higher education and acquire a deeper theoretical and practical knowledge in major computer networks.

"Computer Networks" is not a field that I simply tried to engage. It is a result of profound and long thinking about which field would be the most to suit my interests, my background, and the local society needs. As a developing country, Palestine needs specialists in various fields especially the IT professionals for the building process. Therefore, getting a master's degree in this field will give me the opportunity to conduct several scientific researches that will sure upgrade the technological level in this area.

The United States of America is an excellent country to pursue my education, not only because it is an English speaking country but because it is also one of the most leading countries in IT technology in the world. So, I will be close to new discoveries and achievements in my area of specialization and able to learn all I can from the abundant scientific resources. On the other hand, getting a master's degree from a multicultural country will enchance my cultural experience. As a representative of Palestine, I gained a great experience through my participation in "Reach Out" project which was a regional culture project organized by the British Council. It gave me the opportunity to interact with people from different cultures and made me want to know more about other cultures.

Finally, I strongly believe that getting a master's degree will be a great benefit for me as it will definitely help raising my academic background and enhancing my characteristics. It will also be an advantage for the local society as it will form an alliance to the modern science that started to find its way here.
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