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Hajm  #443545  Sat, 17 Nov 07 12:39 PM

Dear Sir

I’m planning to write a letter for company to set up a trading partnership

Please find below the draft letter, for your kind review and advise

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Dear sir

We have the pleasure to introduce our self as group of investors, have qualified managements and engineers with more than 20 years of experience. With business transactions being carried out in Saudi Arabia, Middle East region as well as International.

Through our establish companies, We deals with a varied range of products and services  namely – such as Coffee shops, Insurance, Materials Handling & Storage, Industrial Products, Real Estate, Building Materials, Chemical Products & Specialities Products.
  

The name and business strength that has been earned by our companies today, is due to the professionally equipped and able staff, who have a varied experience of the Region market and good knowledge of serving the customers to their satisfaction. This is further enhanced by the innovative ideas of the management, who strive from time to time in creating awareness and keeping the investments at par to the latest development of today's world.

We are now in a position to accommodate and look for more businesses. By find a partner to share us our success.

The Middle East has emerged as an important non-traditional furniture market. Countries such as Saudi Arabia, Kuwait and the UAE offer significant market opportunities for furniture exporters around the world.

In recent years however, several emerging furniture markets have caught the attention of the global furniture exporters. The Middle East region, despite being regarded a ‘hot-bed’ of sorts has emerged as an important non-traditional furniture market. Countries such as Saudi Arabia, Kuwait and the United Arab Emirates (UAE) offer significant market opportunities for furniture exporters around the world. Driven by the wealth gained from the all-time-high price for petroleum products in the world market, and the booming construction industry, particularly in the Saudi Arabia and UAE, the demand for furniture in the region has grown rapidly in recent times.

 

Nevertheless, it must be realised that the furniture market is unequal in size throughout the region, as socio-economic and political volatility, which grips a large portion of the region, has adversely affected demand for furniture. An overview of Middle East Furniture Market. (Attached)

Your company is one of our short listed that seem fit the target market and segment planning to fulfil their need.

By accounted on our strengths that distinguishes us in the marketplace by:

  • Knowledge of local culture and relationships.
  • Market wants and need.
  • Extensive industry expertise
  • Proven and experienced management team
  • Broad and evolving service offerings
  • Mobilizing the power of teaming to deliver consistent exceptional service to clients.

And your company experience on the products innovation and development can create long-term, win-win relationships.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you and in the meantime, should you have any queries; please do not hesitate to contact me.

Yours faithfully,

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Best Regards,

M. Haj
  
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Hajm  #443791  Sun, 18 Nov 07 06:36 AM

This is first important letter my manager asks me to draft for that I’m indeed your help to review the letter to be up to my manager expectation.

Please help

  
Feebs11  #443852  Sun, 18 Nov 07 08:00 PM
 Hajm wrote:

Dear Sir

I’m planning to write a letter for company to set up a trading partnership

Please find below the draft letter, for your kind review and advise

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Dear Sir/Madam [There will be female CEOs or senior managers]

We have the pleasure[would like] to introduce ourselves as a group of investors who have qualified managements and engineers engineeering and management qualifications and with more than 20 years of experience of business transactions being carried out in Saudi Arabia and the Middle East region as well as internationally

Through our establish companies, We deal with a varied range of products and services,  namely – such as Coffee shops, Insurance, Materials Handling & Storage, Industrial Products, Real Estate, Building Materials, Chemical Products & Specialities Products.  

The reputation and business strengths that have been earned by our companies today, is due to the professionally equipped  our highly professional and able staff, who have a varied experience of the region's market and good knowledge of dealing with our customers to their satisfaction. This is further enhanced by the innovative ideas of the management, who strive from time to time in creating to increase awareness of our companies in the market place and keeping the investments at par to the latest development of today's world. [Cannot quite make out what you mean here]

We are now in a position to seek for and accommodate and look for more businesses.more participants in our growth. By becoming a partner, you can share our success.



In recent years, several emerging furniture markets have caught the attention of the global furniture exporters. The Middle East region, despite being regarded a ‘hot-bed’ of sorts, has emerged as an important non-traditional furniture market. Countries such as Saudi Arabia, Kuwait and the United Arab Emirates (UAE) offer significant market opportunities for furniture exporters around the world. Driven by the wealth gained from the all-time-high price for petroleum products in the world market, and the booming construction industry, particularly in the Saudi Arabia and  the UAE, the demand for furniture in the region has grown rapidly. in recent times.An overview of the Middle East furniture market is attached.

Nevertheless, it must be realised that the furniture market is unequal in size throughout the region, as socio-economic and political volatility, which grips a large portion of the region, has adversely affected demand for furniture. [This might be a BIG put-off for some people. I would not include it]

Your company is one of our short listed that seems to fit the target market and segment planning to fulfil their need.

By accounted on our strengths that distinguishes us in the marketplace by:The strengths that we can offer in this market are:

  • Knowledge of local culture and relationships.
  • Market wants and need.
  • Extensive industry expertise
  • Proven and experienced management team
  • Broad and evolving service offerings [What do you mean by this? Service to the suppliers or to the customers? Is it perhaps the same as the next point?]
  • Mobilizing the power of teams/teamwork to deliver consistent and exceptional service to clients.

Your company and its products seem to fit the needs of the market, and your company's experience with product innovation and development combined with our local expertise can create long-term, win-win relationships.

I look forward to hearing from you and in the meantime, should you have any queries, please do not hesitate to contact me.

Yours faithfully,

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Best Regards,

M. Haj
  
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Hajm  #443944  Mon, 19 Nov 07 07:54 AM
Thank you Feebs, you are Fabulous
I really appreciate your help.
  
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