Help plz in mu introduction..

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Kagomi  #159465  Thu, 17 Nov 05 06:04 AM

Hi everyone,

How are you doing?

I want some help in my introduction which is about divorce in UAE.. I don't know if there is mistake in verbs or anything else. So, anybody would like to check it.

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Before the rapid development in U.A.E divorce was rare and a shameful act. But nowadays, the divorce rate among nationals is a round 33 percent. In a recent study, the  divorce in U.A.E and other Gulf nations is higher than other countries in the Middle East(Gulf News). In this essay I will explain the causes, effects and solutions for this problem.    

  
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Blue Moon  #159470  Thu, 17 Nov 05 06:16 AM

Hello,

How are you? I am not that great in Essay writing, but I say that that was a really good Introduction. Better then the Introduction I would do, lol. What is your heading? Are you gonna do a heading for your Essay? The Introduction explained alot to me about  your Essay.

 

Thanks,

bye!

  
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Kagomi  #159479  Thu, 17 Nov 05 06:48 AM

I'm fine,

Ya I'm doing a heading for my essay.

Thankyou for passing by.

cheers. 

  
Blue Moon  #159483  Thu, 17 Nov 05 06:51 AM

 

Hello,

Okay, Your welcome! Bye!

 

lol

  
Kagomi  #159486  Thu, 17 Nov 05 06:56 AM

Smile [:)]

bye.

  
Anonymous  #225317  Sun, 14 May 06 04:03 PM
Hi Please can i have a look on your essay.. coz i have an cause and effect essay about divorce in the uae.
  
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