Help to correct my resume...

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Anonymous  #123349  Tue, 02 Aug 05 11:59 AM

 

I need your help to correct this resume for enginnering internship...

  

 

Two-year postgraduate engineering student at ESIM

(Ecole Supérieure d’Ingénieurs de Marseille)

 

OBJECTIVE

 Engineering internship

 

WORKS January-April 2005

Sofresid Engineering

Fr - Lyon - 69

   

Quality, Health, Security and Environment responsible

Overall improvement of the quality system

Folder creation for a global security certification

Design of www.Sofresid-Sudest.com (2nd year internship)

     

 

 

    March 2004

MB Plastique

Fr - Sennecey-les-Dijon - 21

   

Project chief

Machines layout in new factory

Design of www.MBP-Plastics.com (1st year internship)

     

 

 

    August 2003

At home

Fr - Baigneux-les-juifs - 21

   

Webmaster

Design of www.GitesRomenay.com

     

 

 

    August 2002

SARL Mercuzot

Fr - Baigneux-les-juifs - 21

   

Baker

Work in a craft baking

 

SKILLS

Type of skill

Level of Competence

Last use

Experience

   

English

Good

Currently used

12 years

   

Spanish

Intermediate

Currently used

7 years

   

C/HTML/Basic

Intermediate

Currently used

3 years

   

Photoshop / Illustrator

Good

Currently used

3 years

   

Microsoft Office

Good

Currently used

4 years

   

Dreamweaver

Good

Currently used

3 years

   

Inventor / PRO/Engineer

Good

Currently used

2 years

 

OTHER INTERESTS

   Multimedia, computer, Internet and website design.

   Mountain bike, handball, paint-ball, tennis, volleyball and many other sports.

   Referee in handball and volleyball.

   Reading, cinema, nature.

   

 

 

 

 

  
nona the brit  #123364  Tue, 02 Aug 05 01:10 PM
You need the word 'Employment' instead of 'Works' and 'Quality, Health, Security and Environment responsible' makes no sense as a job title.
  
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