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#473547 Wed, 06 Feb 08 08:14 PM

Hola, estoy haciendo un cover letter para trabajar en Londres, podría alguien ayudarme a ver si está correctamente redactado, tengo algunas dudas como "providing good service for (or "to") the customers?, tampoco estoy segura acerca de "set foot" si está bien usado.

Ojalá alguien me pueda ayudar.

Muchas gracias.

Dear Sir/Madam

In response to the advertised position in wwwgumtree.co.uk on January 16^th, please consider my CV in your search for waiting Staff. This is an ideal job for me given my enthusiasm for working, my related experience and qualifications.

I worked as a waitress in a Café and I know the importance of providing good service for the customers. With regard to your requirements, I am convinced I meet all of them. I am able to carrying out several different tasks simultaneously while being friendly, patient and charming. I am good at team work and can also work under pressure.

I am a highly motivated person, very hard working and organized, always willing to undertake new challenges. With my sociable personality and the skills gained with my previous experience, I believe that I would be able to make an important contribution to your company's team.

I believe when a waiter or waitress is good, the customers eat happily, and they come back for more. When a waiter or waitress is bad, most likely they will never set foot into that particular restaurant again.

Therefore, based upon the aforementioned, I would be thrilled to accept this position. I am available for interview at anytime convenient for your company.

Yours faithfully,

Anonymous

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Mister Micawber

#474161 Fri, 08 Feb 08 04:33 AM

Dear Sir/Madam:

In response to the advertised position at wwwgumtree.co.uk on January 16^th, please consider my CV in your search for waiting staff. This is an ideal job for me, given my enthusiasm for working, my related experience, and my qualifications.

I worked as a waitress in a café and I know the importance of providing good service to customers. With regard to your requirements: I am able to carrying out several different tasks simultaneously while being friendly, patient and even charming. I am good at team work and can also work under pressure.

I am a highly motivated person, very hard-working and organized, and I am always willing to undertake new challenges. With my sociable personality and the skills gained from my previous experience, I believe that I would be able to make an important contribution to your company's team.

I believe that when a waiter or waitress is good, the customers dine with satisfaction and will return, but when a waiter or waitress is bad, the customers will never set foot in that restaurant again.

If you have any further questions, pleae contact me at [contact information]. I look forward to the possibility of an interview at any time convenient for you.

Yours faithfully,