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Latest post Wed, Nov 28 2007 2:15 PM by Feebs11. 1 replies.
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Anonymous  +  446830 Tue, 27 Nov 07 07:56 AM

dear helper,

i got from boss this task to reply to, it is a letter sent to him  he wants me to reply as if i'm "HIM". i would like you to see my reply and to help me in writing better letter coz the one i made is too short and not "HIM" as he says also i wana check the grammar mistakes if there is any.

the letter is: j finished reading your book and had to wite to you to tell you how much i enjoyed your philosophy, your fairness in reporting the situation that exists and has existed for so long, the causes therfore and your hope for a peaceful solution. i too hope to see inmy liftetime a solution where both people can live in peace and harmony.education will be the driving force to achieve this realization. thank you again for allowing me to learn so much more than i was aware of.

as an aside, i visited your country . it was and experience of lifetime. would that governments could get along as well as people one on one.

sincerely.

my reply was:

greetings,

 

I would like to thank you for your letter dated 22nd August 2007. I appreciate sharing your opinion regarding my book ; in fact, I’m very glade we shared the same point of view towards the situation , at the end we all are seeking for peace and harmony between both sides.

  

However, I would like to invite you to visit my office whenever you have the chance to discuss the book and share the thoughts.

 

Yours sincerely,

 

 

i hope you can helpme soon

 

Feebs11  +  447415 Wed, 28 Nov 07 02:15 PM
If your boss is an author, why does he not write his own letter?
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