Raji  +  40382 Mon, 02 Aug 04 08:46 AM Dear Readers, Once again I am here with you to share my latest poem. Please spend your some valuable moments to write me. Looking forward for your valuable comments, suggestions and ideas. Kind Regards Raji ---- H o w Can I S a y ? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ One day You were asking me With closed lips With silent words With asking eyes From bottom of heart Your question was same But I was quiet With blank of mind I had nothing to say You had nothing to wait You left without saying anything Without knowing anything You did not understand How can I say? I lost my life... When I lost you Raji Joined on Thu, Jul 29 2004 New Member 29 Regards

	maj  +  40388 Mon, 02 Aug 04 10:02 AM Sorry, I have been quite busy but I would like to say that I find the meaning of this poem really touching. Although you could have used more sophisticated words, sometimes the truth lies in simplicity. The only thing that escapes my understanding is ' Your question was same'. Maybe you could change that line. What do you think? keep up posting your poems. I really enjoyed this one. maj Joined on Mon, Mar 31 2003 Senior Member 4,756

	Raji  +  40898 Thu, 05 Aug 04 10:09 AM Thank you MAJ for your valuable feedback and suggestion and bundle of thanks for spending some valuable moments from your busy schedule. Actually we new writers always need feedbacks and comments on our creations that polish our thoughts. After your indication I feel “Your question was same” is unnecessary line in this poem. So I am deleting this line. Once again thanks for your comments and hope you will continue this guidance in future. Thanks n best regards Raji H o w Can I S a y ? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ One day You were asking me With closed lips With silent words With asking eyes From bottom of heart But I was quiet With blank of mind I had nothing to say You had nothing to wait You left without saying anything Without knowing anything You did not understand How can I say? I lost my life... When I lost you Raji Regards

	maj  +  40906 Thu, 05 Aug 04 11:04 AM Wow, that sounds good. One day We were playing hide and seek on the attic above When the sun escaped a cloud from behind a bush you screamed 'Baby you are my doll' But I was frightened like never before the streets took me for a ride a drink calmed my pride you knew the horizon inside my smile could not lie the bareness of my feet the solitude of my soul Why didn't you knock at my door? No more, no more maj

	Raji  +  41163 Sat, 07 Aug 04 09:03 AM I am extremely sorry RadRook for replying too late. Thank you very much for your encouraging comments. Kind Regards Raji Raji Regards

	Raji  +  41164 Sat, 07 Aug 04 09:07 AM Wao Maj, excellent. Your poem is too good. Thanks for sharing of this simple, descriptive and touchy poem. Best Regards Raji Raji Regards