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Ahn  +  347709 Fri, 06 Apr 07 06:42 AM

<<The requirements of both sides conflicted until the end .-Korea's requirement to advance the time of removal of tariff against the U.S.'s proposal eliminating tariff for automobiles in 3 years, and U.S's attempts to annul the temporary safeguard measures .>>

I want to make this sentence more neat.

The points of this sentence is,

1) Korea and U.S. have conflicting ideas with each other and their requirements clashed until the end.

2) Korea's requirement is to advance the time of removal of tariff againt the U.S's proposal that eliminates tariff for automobiles in 3 years.

3)U.S's requirement is to annul the temporary safeguard measures.

please let me know a good way to express this in 1~3 sentences.

Ahn
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Clive  +  347723 Fri, 06 Apr 07 07:12 AM

Hi,

I want to make this sentence more neat.

Do you want one sentence or three sentences? Please clarify so that we can help you.

I suggest three, as you are trying to convey a lot of information.

Best wishes, Clive

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Ahn, 2 yr 232 days ago

I think 3 sentences will be O.K

Thanks for your reply Clive. Smile [:)]

Clive  +  347859 Fri, 06 Apr 07 04:41 PM

Hi again,

Perhaps like this?

1) Right to the end, Korea and the U.S. had conflicting requirements.

2) Korea wanted to advance the time for removal of the tariff, while the U.S.'s proposal eliminated the tariff on automobiles in 3 years.

3)The U.S was also trying to annul the temporary safeguard measures.

Best wishes, Clive

Anonymous, 2 yr 230 days ago

Thank your very much for your answer Clive.

They are nice sentences...Big Smile [:D]

Ahn, 2 yr 230 days ago

Thank your very much for your answer Clive.

They are nice sentences...Big Smile [:D]

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