Rule 1: Don't publish in colours.  It is a poem, not a painting, and you just distract from the words.

This is a very interesting poem, and I think you have promise as a serious poet if you work hard at it.  I would like to see you join us here in the 21st century by modernizing all the thous and thines-- those went out with Ben Jonson... and you have used some of them wrong anyway.  It is a stilted, archaic style which works against the effect of a poem in the same way that the colours do:  they distract and preoccupy the reader, who should be paying attention to what you are saying.

There are many turns of phrase that I find very compelling, some very strong visual images:

to a fully tease
Thrust your eye as deep as
buried inside my hips  (one r in buried)
Let our love lure reasoning

Others are cliche and should be rephrased:

made me amaze
not a time we both have waste
we know we'd love it well

And a couple are really bad and must be dumped:

coz it's smell
the ding dong bell

Overall, however, it is a very solid piece of work, and well worth putting more time into fixing.  Thank you for posting and good luck.