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Stevenukd  +  464778 Wed, 16 Jan 08 05:41 AM

Dear Teachers,

1. Loving someone is accept to replace the tears by all of your smiles , although how hurt is your heart.

- Is this natural to say?

Thanks very much to Teachers,

 Stevenukd.

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Hoa Thai  +  464788 Wed, 16 Jan 08 06:36 AM
 Stevenukd wrote:

Dear Teachers,

1. Loving someone is accept to replace the tears by all of your smiles , although how hurt is your heart.

- Is this natural to say?

Thanks very much to Teachers,

 Stevenukd.


Hi Steve,

Sometimes, the clumsiness of one's language of love might be more charming than flowery statements. Smile [:)] Anyway, your sentence needs a bit of polishing touch. Of course, there are other ways / different words to express the same feeling. Here is my suggestion:

To love is to willingly replace your tears with smiles even when you feel hurt.

How about this one?

To love is to smile over the tears of your hurting heart.


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Best Regards - Hoa Thai
Hoa Thai  +  465308 Thu, 17 Jan 08 06:19 AM
Hi Steve,

I have to resort to this means to let you know that my answer did not reach you since your private email's quota was used up.
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