How to introduce myself for a job interview

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Following is my self-introduce for next monday's job interview, Welcome everybody to put forward the suggestion and the criticism. Thanks in advance! (Thanks Amining first!)

Dear Sir or Madam,

Thank you very much for reading my application and I am much honored to introduce myself here.

My name is ABC. I am 24 years old and I come from XXX, the capital of Hunan Province. I am seeking an opportunity to work with XXX as a Engineer. My professional experience and my awareness of your unparalleled reputation have led me to want to work for your company.

I have a bachelor degree with a major in Electronic field. I graduated from XXX University-widely considered one of the most beautiful universities of the world. During the 4 year undergraduate study, my academic records kept distinguished. I was granted scholarship every semester. Additionally, I applied a XXX patent, it was authorized in 2005.

In 2005, I got the privilege to enter the graduate program waived of the admission test.I selected Electronic Engineering of XXX University to continue my study. In the passing 1 year, my research and study dedicated to Linux. I applied another patent which was still in applying. I won the scholarship in 2006.

Besides, I participated in many school activities, which widened my horizons and gave me many opportunities to do practical work in companies. All of that were very useful to my major study.

During this period, I have learnt much. I learned the values of teamwork and commitment, how to win, how to work hard, how to concentrate and focus on goals, and how to balance my time and priorities. The passing years offered me a good chance to give full play to my creativity, intelligence and diligence.

With a healthy body, with the solid professional knowledge, with the youthful passion, with the yearning for the future and the admiration of your company, I am eager to enter your company and make my share of contribution to it.

Thank you for your patience.

Best wishes.

Sincerely yours,

ABC

Any suggestion and the criticism. Thanks !
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Hi Openxu,

Welcome to the Forum.

I'm not sure what you mean by my self-introduce. Is this a letter that you will send to someone? Or will you take it to the interview and read it? Or will you try to memorize it and then say all this?

Will your interview be in China? Is it with an English-speaking company?

We can give you better comments if we understand these things.

Best wishes, Clive
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Thanks Clive!
Is this a letter that you will send to someone? Or will you take it to the interview and read it? Or will you try to memorize it and then say all this?------I will take it to the interview and read it.
Will your interview be in China? ------Yes.
Is it with an English-speaking company?------Yes.

Thanks All!
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Hi again,

Reading a text like this in an interview is never done , here in Canada. Are you sure that this will be considered normal in China? Are you sure they will give you an opportunity to read it? I would think they would just ask you to speak without notes, since as an employee you will have to talk without notes in many situations.

Anyway, I have suggested a number of changes, so please read carefully.

Best wishes, Clive

Thank you very much for reading my application and I am much honored to introduce myself here.

My name is ABC. I am 24 years old and I come from ***, the capital of Hunan Province. I am seeking an opportunity to work with *** as a Engineer. My professional experience and my awareness of your unparalleled reputation have led me to want to work for your company.

I have a bachelor degree with a major in the Electronics field. I graduated from *** University, which is idely considered one of the best universities in the world. During tmy 4 years of undergraduate study, my academic results were always distinguished. I was granted a scholarship every semester. Additionally, I applied for a *** patent (for what?), and it was authorized in 2005.

In 2005, I was privileged to enter the graduate program, and the admission test was waived for me. I selected Electronic Engineering at *** University to continue my study. In the last (?) year, my research and studies were dedicated to Linux. I have applied another patent (for what?). I won a scholarship in 2006.

Besides, I participated in many school activities, which widened my horizons and gave me many opportunities to do practical work with various companies. All of this was very useful for my major study.

During this period, I have learnt much. I have learned the values of teamwork and commitment, how to win, how to work hard, how to concentrate and focus on goals, and how to balance my time and priorities. The passing years have offered me a good chance to give full play to my creativity, intelligence and diligence.

With a healthy body, with solid professional knowledge, with youthful passion, with yearning for the future and with admiration for your company, I am eager to join you and make my contribution.
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Hehe,Thanks Clive! I can not take any Notes so I have to memorize it.

I have a bachelor degree with a major in the Electronics field. I graduated from *** University, which is idely considered one of the best universities in the world.

I received a bachelor degree with a major in the Electronics field from *** University, which is widely considered one of the best universities in the world. ...

At 14:00 of this afternoon, the interview will begin.Hope good news.Thanks.



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Good luck!

Clive
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Anonymous:
I am seeking an opportunity to work with *** as a Engineer.

work with ? what i cant understand
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... as a Engineer
or
... as an Engineer
?!
Good Luck! Emotion: wink
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Anonymous:
pls help me. im not good in englis h i dont know how to construct sentences for my job interview
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