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Semicolon is used, besides else, to separate
- two sentences that are closely related
- complex items in the list
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This information is right, Aperisic; however, in your--
| I was in the house number 21, 32 and 45; and the garages, patios and windows were all destroyed by the earthquake. |
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-- semicolons should not used with conjunctions; they are used instead of conjunctions. The following is OK:
I was in house numbers 21, 32 and 45; the garages, patios and windows were all destroyed by the earthquake.
The following is wrong because-- unless it is a list with internal commas-- an independent clause must be on each side of the semicolon:
| Gold, silver and platinum coins; and rings, bracelets and brooches made of these materials must pass through the customs. |
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The above is not a list (which requires at least 3 items-- you have only two, A and B below), so it needs to read: (A) Gold, silver and platinum coins and (B) rings, bracelets and brooches made of these materials must pass through the customs.
But-- as we are all trying to accomplish-- the awkward and after coins can be replaced (according to my perception, at least) by as well as. I think there are some other good suggestions earlier in the thread as well.
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I know what you want to say and I agree, but I repeat that there is possibly no other way to separate two and's in case where, for some reason, they appear one after another.
In this case
I was in the house number 21, 32 and 45; and the garages, patios and windows were all destroyed by the earthquake.
marked and has the same function as this and
I was in the house, and I found nobody there.
not as in this one
I was in the house and in the cellar, but I found nobody there.
Now, you probably think why anyone would use two successive and's, if you can use something else. I don't know, I just think what I would do if someone would insist on it, nothing else. (Maybe in a poem...)
At first when I read the initial question, I understood literally that we must connect those items with successive and's and I gave the answer, then I said what to do if two and's are changed as you all did. And whatever anyone of you say, I will not change my claim.
The semicolon is possible in this situation, if you really don't want to give up having two consecutive and's (and I agree that what you get with a semicolon is clumsy; that is why I gave the other options), but as with a semicolon always is, you should rethink whether a semicolon is really the final resort you can pull out for your sentence.
If you do not consider a semicolon for the situation like this one in the initial question, then you will probably never use a semicolon. A semicolon, in essence, is a grammatical element, but far more a stylistic one.
And that is my final point (OK, with two sample lines that follow it
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