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JohnDoe  +  62838 Wed, 22 Dec 04 08:07 AM
Hey everybody!
poetry is not one of the things I am really good at...
But I kinda need a poem for my girlfriend....
so I hope there is someone out there who has got a really good, romantic poem
which I can send her.....
So PLEASE HELP!
Thnx!
Thijs
JohnDoe
Joined on Sun, Dec 19 2004
the Netherlands
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anita_a  +  62936 Wed, 22 Dec 04 06:56 PM
How about this?

I don't want anything from you
I want to give you my love
I don't want to see your face
I want to lock you in my heart
I don't want to feel your touch
I want you to dwell in my being
I don't want loving words from you
I want to sing love songs to you
I don't want you to live with me
I want to die loving you.


Hope it helps you...
anita_a
Joined on Tue, Jul 27 2004
Sunny California
Regular Member 822
Cheers,Anita
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JohnDoe, 4 yr 334 days ago
Thnx Anita!
it's a good one!
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HePo  +  65840 Thu, 06 Jan 05 05:37 PM
I love- love. Try this if you like:


While You Slept

"Morning rose with a jubilant yawn

and on they came

sliding on sunbeams,
the cracks and pin holes of our curtain:

weary stares

- after a night of hard labour -

tired and lost

finding refuge in kiss curls:
the little blond hammocks of your hair.

You were the vessel

and stars the crew.

Jealousy became me:

to blow hot and lustful-
like the harsh wind of zephyr
to the Sahara's soft sands,

it was cruel of me.

And so I woke you."

HePo
Joined on Thu, Jan 6 2005
UK, England, Leicestershire.
New Member 14
Guest, 4 yr 307 days ago
Hi, I found a girl that i like and i wanted to ask her out this upcoming V-Day in a poem. But, poetry is also not one of my strong points. can somebody help me out with a good hook up poem that i could give my future girlfriend(hopefully)?
thanx,
randy
Guest, 4 yr 307 days ago
you sit and watch me cry
knowing the pain i am in
i am unable to show emotions
until the endless tears begin.
a piece of me is dieing
and lying on the floor
the dreams i had are over
and can only be no more
if sadness shown like beauty
i'd be brighter than the sun
gazed upon by wondering eyes
and loved by everyone.
Anonymous, 4 yr 94 days ago

give her this ok

 

                                                     Love is Love

                                                         True is True

                                                       all my love

                                                       belongs to you

Anonymous, 4 yr 34 days ago

My Angelchemas-microsoft-com:office:office" />>>

I love you with love that even cupid can not provide>>

Thus, the love I have for you is no ordinary love>>

The love I have for you is love more then love, which serves you right>>

Because you are no ordinary woman.>>

You are my love, my treasury, my companion, my…>>

> >

I love you passionately and devotionally>>

I love you with my mind, body and soul>>

I love you not just because your goodness likes body>>

Which no word man kind have ever made can be use to describe>>

But because everything that you are to me>>

To me your eyes are like the northern star that shines through the dark gloomy nights>>

To me your smiles are like the warmness of the summer wind that below the winter chill away>>

To me you are an angel send from heaven by god above.>>

Here as a beacon to guide and lead me through my loneliest days>>

Here to be my true companion and life long mate>>

Here to love me and be loved by me>>

That is why to me you are more perfect then perfection>>

To me you are a dime plus ninety-nine>>

       Hey try this.... I'm not that great with poems but this might actually help...

Anonymous, 4 yr 28 days ago

                                                       I Love You                                                    

                                                 When your happy

                                                    When your sad

                                                  When your playing

                                                    When your mad

                                          When your felling down right blue                            

                                                 The reason i love you

                                                  Is, because your you

By: Lashae a.k.a Shae-Shae

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