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Latest post Thu, Apr 17 2008 5:28 AM by Clive. 2 replies.
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Anonymous  +  501684 Thu, 17 Apr 08 03:38 AM

here is my problem,i just graduated from collage,never work in any kind of trading company before. However i am working in vietnam for my aunt currently. I need to help my aunt to write an official email to the other company requesting to purchase one of their products. I want to ask about price details but i am not sure how to ask is more formal and suitable. This is my attemp,plls correct me thank u!

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Anonymous, 1 yr 219 days ago
  Dear Mr. Mark:  This is ***** representing *******SERVICE & TRADING CO. LTD. The company would like to purchase filters (size: 1m X 20m) *** TECHNOLOGIES.  Could you please give us a price list on the product?  Thank you very much for your assistance in this matter.  It is greatly appreciated. Sincerely,  
 Emily 
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Clive  +  501720 Thu, 17 Apr 08 05:28 AM

Hi,

Dear Mr. Mark,

I represent ******* Ltd., which is a service and trading company. We would like to purchase filters (size: 1m X 20m) *** TECHNOLOGIES.  We would be grateful for a price list for this product.

Thank you very much for your assistance in this matter.  It is greatly appreciated. 

Yours sincerely,  

 Emily Smith
 
Best wishes, Clive
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