here is my problem,i just graduated from collage,never work in any kind of trading company before. However i am working in vietnam for my aunt currently. I need to help my aunt to write an official email to the other company requesting to purchase one of their products. I want to ask about price details but i am not sure how to ask is more formal and suitable. This is my attemp,plls correct me thank u!

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Dear Mr. Mark: This is ***** representing *******SERVICE & TRADING CO. LTD. The company would like to purchase filters (size: 1m X 20m) from******ADVANCED TECHNOLOGIES. Could you please give us a price list on the product?Thank you very much for your assistance in this matter. It is greatly appreciated.Sincerely,


Dear Mr. Mark,

I represent ******* Ltd., which is a service and trading company. We would like to purchase filters (size: 1m X 20m) *** TECHNOLOGIES. We would be grateful for a price list for this product.

Thank you very much for your assistance in this matter. It is greatly appreciated.

Yours sincerely,

Emily Smith

Best wishes, Clive
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