Jacko  +  1254 Tue, 24 Jun 03 09:16 AM I can't write poems, so I'd just kind of make arbitrary phrases to make my poem. These eyes, when are they going to sleep These wounds, when are they going to heal Emotions, where do they collect to form a heap Indifference, should they ever morph into zeal Young, naive, and subordinate, as you've said Inexperience, full of dreams, putting me down Contempt, hatred, remember the color red That's what shall flow when my enmities frown ...I'm sleepy, tomorrow again... Jacko Joined on Fri, Jun 20 2003 Full Member 215 ...Ad Space For Sale... Contact St. Nick for Details

	Jason13_32  +  1280 Wed, 25 Jun 03 04:17 AM I think you can write poems however you want! Poetic license! Just do your best and use natural expression! Jason13_32 Joined on Wed, Jun 25 2003 New Member 20

	pieter  +  2731 Sun, 27 Jul 03 09:39 PM I will write here what I wrote on the cover of my recently published poetry book: "Dear reader, this volume was a surprise. It says that we have to learn: to use the Windows, to hunt, to fish, to see the colours, to walk straight, to wait for the tram, to close the gate, to give shots, to plough, to harvest, to feed babies, to learn, forget, to score a penaly, to sleep in fresh snow. Love and poetry just exist. pieter Joined on Sun, Jul 27 2003 Tg Mures, Romania Regular Member 942 " Teaching doesn't mean knowledge but action."

	anita_a  +  39855 Thu, 29 Jul 04 06:46 AM What's the name of your poetry book? Could u give os a sample of one your favorite poems, please? anita_a Joined on Tue, Jul 27 2004 Sunny California Regular Member 822 Cheers,Anita Sample

	Radrook  +  39920 Thu, 29 Jul 04 05:58 PM Enjoyed the read. Liked the symbolic imagery "red" and personification "frowning emnities" I also liked the shift of tone in the last stanza and the poem's enigmatic last line. Radrook Joined on Sun, Jun 13 2004 Junior Member 99

	lilbit  +  39991 Fri, 30 Jul 04 04:31 AM I wish I could make such beautiful thoughts as these. They are very nice and pleasant. Good for the mind and body. Thank you. lilbit Joined on Tue, Jul 20 2004 USA Full Member 202