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#481114 Sun, 24 Feb 08 06:13 PM

Hi,

The task is :
Think of all the possible causes and effects of the following situations.
5.Nowadays,young people read less than in the past.Therefore,
a.Most young people haven't good spelling and sentence structure.
b.They don't learn more interesting things . ( I need write "interesting" or "interested" and when i used with two ).
c.They haven't good vocabulary.

This is my answers and I need someone check me that and repair the mistakes.

Thanks .

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Sentence structures, Spelling, Vocabulary

Ant_222

#481142 Sun, 24 Feb 08 08:48 PM

  "The majority of young people _don't have  a_  good  (writing)
  style."

  "They don't learn _many_ interesting things" --  I  think  you
  should be more specific here. Why don't they?  Maybe,  because
  TV  and  PC  offer  a  lot  of  useless  (and  often  harmful)
  entartainment; and browsing web or watching a TV show  imposes
  less work on our brains  and  is  therefore  easier  and  more
  pleasing and indulging to our worst desires?

  "They don't have _a_ good vocabulary" or, not to  repreat  the
  structure of the forst sentence, -- "Their vocabulary is poor"

  And you haven't provided any causes  of  such  a  desparate  a
  situation!

Ant_222

Joined on Sun, May 21 2006

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Vocabulary

BeginStudent

#481538 Mon, 25 Feb 08 06:06 PM

thanks ,
I don't understand the first sentence may you write it again ?
I can say instead sentence two :
They don't improve their language.
second possibility :
The children don't enter the magic world of the books.

BeginStudent