I need help grammar

Silviapham wrote:

please help grammar for me, thanks

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Silvia Pham

My Earliest Caregiver

            I was born in south country side Vietnam. On that time, we don’t have any child care center, preschool or kindergarten.  There is only have baby-sister and nanny, but most people in country side as my family can’t afford to hire baby sister or nanny. So, my earliest caregiver was my oldest sister. 

I could not remember about my infant. I was told by my mother, as I was one year old, I started walk and talk some simple words. I was nervous person.  I was often crying when strange people look at me, I only was friendly to my sister and parents.  I asked too many question  to my sister, such as, “what  was this and that all the time” my sister just answered all my question, I kept asking the same question again and again for several times. My sister was so tired with me. I loved playing doll toys too much.  I hold the doll most of the time even I went to sleep, the doll must be put next to me, if not, I cried out loud. I scared the toy as snake. I loved to go to school, even I didn’t know what was school it, every time my big brother go school,  I saw him, and I cried out that “ I go school,  I go school”. After my brother had gone, then I kept quietly, I played something else. And I also liked to clap, climb, and sat on the sand.  I learned fast and I am the one kind of easy going, not as difficult as others sister and brother in my family.  I had a positive value that I was smiling and laughing to people who I know a lot that made my parents happiness.

Writing about my earliest caregiver, I have chance to ask my parents about my childhood. It is very interesting, enjoyable and sometimes makes me funny, too.  Now I know history about my infants and I also understand how hard my sister has take good care of me. I will unforgettable to my sister and love her forever in my whole life.

Hi Silvia,

My Earliest Caregiver

            I was born in the countryside of south Vietnam. At that time, there were no child care centers, preschools or kindergartens.  There were only have baby-sitters and nannies, but most country people like my family could not afford to hire them. So, my earliest caregiver was my oldest sister. 

            I can not remember about my infancy. I was told by my mother that, when I was one year old, I started to walk and to speak some simple words. I was a nervous person.  I often cried when strange people looked at me, I was only was friendly to my sister and parents.  I asked my sister a lot of questions, such as “What  is this and that" all the time. Although my sister just answered all my questions, I kept asking the same ones again and again. My sister was so tired of me. I loved playing with dolls.  I held a doll most of the time. Even when I went to sleep, the doll had to be put next to me and, if it wasn't,  I cried loudly. I scared the toy as snake. <<<< ????? I wanted to go to school, even though I didn’t know what school was. Every time my big brother went to school,  I saw him and I cried out that “ I go school,  I go school”. After my brother had gone, then I kept quiet and I played something else. I also liked to clap, climb, and sit on the sand.  I learned fast and I am the easy going one in my family, not as difficult as my other sisters and brothers.  I had a positiveattitude, and  I smiled and laughed a lot to people who I knew. That made my parents happy.

While writing about my earliest caregiver, I have had the chance to ask my parents about my childhood. It is very interesting, enjoyable and sometimes makes me laugh, too.  Now I know the history of my childhood and I also understand how hard my sister worked to take good care of me. I will never forget my sister and I will love love her forever.

I think you need to write more about your care-giver and less about yourself.

Best wishes, Clive

Hi Clive

I scared the toy as snake. <<<< ?????

I would say that, the snake which not real, it is a toy, but i don't know how to write in sentence. thanks