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Latest post Sat, Aug 16 2008 9:31 AM by 26TMNTJG2PG. 2 replies.
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non1101  +  555424 Sat, 16 Aug 08 08:34 AM
Hello!
I was wondering if someone can look over my cover letter for me. I'm not a good writer and advice would help alot! I'm not sure if I should add more to the letter or not. I'm applying for a dog daycare position at a dog daycare place. Thank you!

Dear Hiring Manager:

I am interested in applying for the daycare team position for the __ company. I found this job opportunity advertised on Craigslist.

I am a true dog lover and I have always had a strong passion for animals, especially for dogs. I had a dog of 6 years which I truly loved and care about. Taking care of her helped me acquire basic canine behavior and taught me the responsibility of taking care of a pet. I always love playing with dogs whenever I get the chance, especially when visiting friends who have dogs. I do not mind getting dirty and I can be on my feet for few hours. I worked at ________ and _______ as a sales associate which gave me the abilities to work in a high paced environment while assisting customers efficiently and courteously. I am also able to work as a team member and independently as well.

Thank you for your time and consideration. It would be a pleasure to interview with you to discuss my qualifications and I look forward to hearing from you soon. 

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26TMNTJG2PG  +  555434 Sat, 16 Aug 08 09:16 AM
I am interested in applying for the daycare team position for the __ company. I have found this job opportunity advertised on Craigslist.

I am a true dog lover and I have always had a strong passion for animals, especially for dogs. I had have a dog of 6 years which I truly loved and care about.

Taking care of her (the dog) has helped me acquire the basic knowledge of canine behavior and taught me the responsibility of taking care of a pet. I always love playing with dogs whenever I get the chance, especially when visiting friends who have dogs.

I do not mind getting dirty and I can be on my feet for few hours. I having worked at ________ and _______ as a sales associate. Such jobs have equipped which gave me with the abilities to work in a high paced environment while assisting customers efficiently and courteously. I am also able to work as a team member and or independently as well.

Thank you for your time and consideration. It would be a pleasure to be offered an interview with you to discuss my qualifications, and I look forward to hearing from you soon. 

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26TMNTJG2PG  +  555438 Sat, 16 Aug 08 09:31 AM
26TMNTJG2PG
“I do not mind getting dirty and I can be on my feet for few hours. I having worked at ________ and _______ as a sales associate. Such jobs have equipped which gave me with the abilities to work in a high paced environment while assisting customers efficiently and courteously. I am also able to work as a team member and or independently as well. ”
    

Further amendments are deemed necessary for this paragraph as follows:-

I do not mind getting dirty myself dirtied and I can be on my feet for few hours. I having worked at ________ and _______ as a sales associate. Such jobs have equipped which gave me with the abilities to work in a high paced environment while assisting customers efficiently and courteously. I am also able to work as a team member and or independently as well.
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