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#478491 Mon, 18 Feb 08 04:49 PM

Hello,

I write a formal letter, and i need to give it to my teacher tomorrow.i would someone can check me this spelling and structure.

**** *******.

24^th January , 2008 Dear Mr. XXXX,

I am doing an English project about "heroin" .I wanted to know a little bit more about you and what happened when you were an addict.

I would like to ask you some questions about your past life as an addict.

The first question is how were you exposed to heroin?.

Moreover,I would like to know what were the frequencies that you have used the heroin drug ?.

The second question is how does a man who was an addict overcome this condition.

I am grateful for your time and effort.I am looking forward to your response.

Sincerely,

xxxxx

Thanks alot for help , i need it urgently .

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Clive

#478542 Mon, 18 Feb 08 07:23 PM

Hi,

I've deleted the name and addresss from your first post, because you seem to be telling the world this man's name, and that he is a former heroin addict. I'm not sure if this information is real. If it is, you need to protect people's privacy.

You also say that you are going to give this letter to your teacher. Does that mean that your teacher is a former addict? If so, then again you need to be careful about asking such questions.

*******.

24^th January , 2008

Dear Mr. XXXX,

I am doing an English project about heroin, so I would like to know a little bit more about you and what happened when you were an addict.

I hope ou don't mind if I ask you these questions.

How were you exposed to heroin?.

How often did you use it?

How does a man who was an addict overcome this condition?.

I am grateful for your time and effort. I am looking forward to your response.

Sincerely,

xxxxx

Best wishes, Clive

Clive

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BeginStudent

#478552 Mon, 18 Feb 08 07:47 PM

I want to clear my words , I have to give to my teacher my project about heroin tomorrow.
I wrote letter unreal to someone apparently addict, it is only for my project about heroin . ( lol my teacher isn't addict ).
"I hope ou don't .."- what is the word ou ?

Thanks a lot .

BeginStudent

Clive

#478553 Mon, 18 Feb 08 07:53 PM

Hi,

you

Clive

BeginStudent

#478561 Mon, 18 Feb 08 08:19 PM

Thanks.
if could you check me this i will happy :

3)How do peope spread heroin?

Heroin is being trafficked all over the world.The biggest producer is Afghanistan.According to research 87% of heroin is being produced in Afghanistan.Heroin is very easily distribute around the world,because it can be compactly packed and easily concealed.

Heroin is also being spread all over the world because people can swallow it like pills and during 24 hours they can puke it easily.

Those unfortunate people who swallow the "pills" May die because of it .The "pills" are little bit bigger than the normal size pill and it can get stuck in the throat or it may be torn inside the stomach and cause

Death even without using the heroin as a drug .

In conclusion, the heroin may be spread all over the world easily ,but the consequences may be shocking .

thanks , I'm giving it now because i haven't time to do that on other time.

BeginStudent

Clive

#478585 Mon, 18 Feb 08 09:33 PM

Hi,

Here are some edits.

Clive

3)How do peope spread heroin?

Heroin is trafficked all over the world. The biggest producer is Afghanistan. According to researchm 87% of heroin is produced in Afghanistan. It is very easily distributed around the world,because it can be compactly packed and easily concealed.

Heroin is also spread all over the world because people can swallow it like pills and 24 hours later they can regurgitate itt easily.

Those unfortunate people who swallow the "pills" may die because of it .The "pills" are a little bit bigger than normal-sized pills and they can get stuck in the throat or may be torn open inside the stomach and cause death even without the heroin being used as a drug .

In conclusion, heroin may be spread all over the world easily, but the consequences are shocking .

Clive