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I wrote an essay about stresses or peer pressure.
Peer Pressures – peer pressures can be defined as stresses.
Stresses
Peer pressures can be defined as stresses. Many of teachers and parents would tell their children or students that they’re young, and they shouldn’t be effect by stresses. Despite what adults say, teens do get stresses. Many of teens are facing stresses due to school, parents, and drugs.
Firstly, teens are facing stresses from school. Some of teens are night people which mean that they have hard time getting up early in the morning. They need to setup their alarm Clark to get ready for the school. As school progress, they are due with homework, and study for the tests. When the test day is reached they need to study extra hours to prepare for the test. After stressing out from the school, they need to face their parents.
Secondly, teen are facing stresses from parents. Parents are always limiting their children from freedom. They can’t play video games, hanging around with friends, and watching TV. Parents are expecting their children to do house jobs, like cleaning dishes, vacuuming the house, and watch their little brothers and or sisters. Parents are always pushing their child to the edge by saying you didn’t put effort into your homework, or test, and so on. Teens should be more stressful facing their parents, which means that they could place their hands on drugs to show resistance from their parents.
Finally, many teens are using drugs to rebel from the adults, and free from stresses. Mainly, drugs are delivered by friends to force them to use it, or else they would be left alone. Cigarettes are easiest drug that they could get their hands on. They use it to feel freedom, release stresses. In teen’s point of view, alcohols can be an escape pod from the world. They already know that alcohols can ruin their lives, but our environment is pushing them and leading them to drink alcohols.
When I was a teen, my parents didn’t put too much weight on my shoulders. But many of my friends went different way because of stresses or peer pressures. Adults and our environment shouldn’t put too much weight on their shoulders to lead them to the wrong way.