baller228“Can u you please point out the lines that are not iambic pentameter..and tell me how to fix them!!”
a There is nothing to me cause what happened
b I will never forget you in my heart
a Now we have lost love and we are saddened
b You have moved along, now our hearts apart
c I can't keep you out of my conscious mind
d But now I decided to move along
c On my search, I will overlook your kind
d Now I have found a girl that will love lifelong
e Both of us will live a life full of love
f We won't leave each other by any mean
e Now I can see the doves flying above
f She shall be the best and my supreme queen
g I have forever forgotten the past
g For today I am with her at long last
The line in blue has 11 syllables -- one too many. The rest have the correct syllable count of 10.
The words in green cause the lines to end with an unstressed syllable. That is not characteristic of iambic rhythm.
Only the pieces of lines marked in brown are strict iambic pentameter. Sometimes the first two syllables have a reversed stress pattern in the sonnets you will read, and a little of that is fine for variety, but you have altered the pattern much more than that on most lines. Number the syllables 1 through 10. For a really strict iambic rhythm, the odd numbered ones should all be unstressed, and the even numbered ones should all be stressed.
You should also note that some of this makes no sense because it is grammatically incorrect, for example, the first line.
CJ