Hi,
could u help me please to check my english grammar ?
I have one complain letter for IELTS test.
I really appreciated for your help
Regards,
SG
Dear Sport Club Manager:
I am writing this letter to have an
enquiries regards with sport club membership. First of all I would like to
introduce my self. I am a college student of Sydney University. In addition, I
got a reference from my classmate in the university that your sport club has
many facilities and kinds of sport equipments. Last week, when I surveyed your
sport club place facilities. My first impression was very good and feel
convenience. There are three reasons. First, sport club location is strategic,
close to the city and campus. I do not have any difficulties to go there.
Second, your sport club has many kinds of sport equipment and facilities such as
treadmill and a large swimming pool. Furthermore, you keep toilet and swimming
pool to be always clean and sterile.Third, you have fitness tutors who are very
helpful and friendly to help all the member.
I have some enquiries as the
following bellows :
· How much does the registration of membership fee ?
· How much does the monthly membership fee ?
· What are the required document for membership registration ?
· What are the sport packages that you have ?
I am waiting your reply. I am
expecting you will give me the complete information.
I really appreciate for your assistance.
Regards,
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