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Jandi
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Tue, 25 Jan 05 01:28 AM
- (The choice was his alone.) If he [opened] the door, there [came] out of it a hungry tiger which immediately jumped on him and tore him to pieces as punishment for his guilt.
This is from a book. Is this sentence correct?
Should it be "If he opened the door, there would come out ... "?
Thank you very much.
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CalifJim
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Tue, 25 Jan 05 03:48 AM
It doesn't follow the usual paradigm, but that doesn't make it incorrect. This is a literary device to describe the action more vividly. Note also the use of "there came out of it a hungry tiger", rather more literary than the usual "a hungry tiger would come out of it". This is definitely not a sentence you would normally hear in an everyday conversation! So the author is not likely to want to tell the story using everyday language, right?
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"There are no facts, only interpretations" - Nietzsche
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Jandi,
4 yr 302 days ago
Yes, I've got it.
Thank you!
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just the truth
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Tue, 25 Jan 05 07:11 AM
- (The choice was his alone.) If he [opened] the door, there [came] out of it a hungry tiger which immediately jumped on him and tore him to pieces as punishment for his guilt.
This is from a book. Is this sentence correct?
JT: PERFECTLY CORRECT; just a bit literary and reminiscent of an older form of English [possibly even an older subjunctive form; why isn't anyone complaining about this one?].
Should it be "If he opened the door, there would come out ... "?
JT: Your sentence sounds a bit funny, Jandi; the "there would come out". POSSIBILTY, it too is an older style subjunctive form.
But now we have a situation that illustrates how and why ENLs choose these expressions using present tense or past tense FORMS. [historical past tense forms in the case of modals]
Put yourself in that person's shoes, Jandi. Again, the choice is entirely yours.
Jandi: If I open the door, a tiger will come out and devour me.
Jandi If I opened the door, a tiger would come out and devour me.
Both are certainly possible. Choosing illustrates that the speaker doesn't want to do that; the speaker puts it more into the realm of the highly improbable, a position that the speaker wants it to be, for obvious reasons.
If I opened [for this situation] is saying, "Not that I would but if did, then this would happen".
"If I open the door, a tiger will ..." is allowing that it is a more real chance.
Even a mixed conditional is possible,
"If I open the door, a tiger would ..."
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Jandi,
4 yr 302 days ago
Thank you, JTT!
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