In less than 20 years from then

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Ahn

#431899 Thu, 18 Oct 07 02:48 AM

In less than 20 years from then, the number of mobile phone subscribers is over 42million. In the diffusion rate, it’s 87.7%.

->Please check if this sentence is awkward. I really don't know how to write the second sentence. 'in the diffusion rate' part.

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Clive

#431919 Thu, 18 Oct 07 04:57 AM

Hi,

In less than 20 years from then, the number of mobile phone subscribers is over 42million. In the diffusion rate, it’s 87.7%.

->Please check if this sentence is awkward. I really don't know how to write the second sentence. 'in the diffusion rate' part.

I'd say In less than 20 years, the number of mobile-phone subscribers has grown to more than 42 million. The diffusion rate is 87.7%.

Best wishes, Clive

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Ahn

#432001 Thu, 18 Oct 07 11:56 AM

Thank you, Clive.^^