"Nearly nine months ago Lost closed its third season in as nail biting of a place as it had ever closed a season."
I need a paraphrase of the sentence, especially the highlighted part. Thanks.
As written, there are several problems with this sentence. I'd say
"Nearly nine months ago, Lost closed its third season in as nail biting of a place as that in which it had ever closed a season."
Even corrected, it's still a cumbersome sentence. Here's how I'd reword it.
"Nearly nine months ago, Lost closed its third season with a very tense situation that left viewers nervous and anxious. Neither of the two previous seasons had ended with more tension."
I lost patience with 'Lost' over a year ago, and stopped watching. I arrived at the opinion that the writers were just making it up each week, with no overall idea of what the whole story was about. ![Stick out tongue [:P]](/emoticons/emotion-4.gif)
Best wishes, Clive
Clive