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jazzmaster  +  626228 Tue, 30 Dec 08 02:43 AM
Another input requested on passive voice problem.

This is a sentence probably presented by the Immigration Department :

You have been received entry.

Question: how is this sentence constructed?  Or is it simply not correct?


Explanation of the question:
A. Jimmy Page gave me a guitar.

B. A guitar was given to me by JP.
C. I was given a guitar by JP

... the sentence A can be rewritten into B or C in passive voice.  That is possible because verbs such as "give" and "send" take two objects; "me" and "a guitar" in the sentence A.  However the verb "receive" takes only one object as I think. 

Then, in order for the sentence, "
You have been received entry." to be valid, you have to be able to say:

The Immigration Department received me entry.  ... To me, this is saying like, "I will drive me a car." or "I'll drink me a beer."

I ask for your clarifications on this, hopefully by running A, B and C sentences above.

Thanks in advance.

J

p.s.  I don't think it matters but the original sentence in question is, "you could be the last applicant to have been received entry."


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CalifJim  +  626234 Tue, 30 Dec 08 02:50 AM

jazzmaster
“You have been received entry.”
Not correct.  We'd expect  You have been granted entry or You have been denied entry.

CJ
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CalifJim  +  626236 Tue, 30 Dec 08 02:52 AM

jazzmaster
“you could be the last applicant to have been received entry”
Also wrong.

All your comments about forming the passive are OK, however.

CJ
jazzmaster  +  628167 Thu, 01 Jan 09 01:08 AM
CJ, thanks for coming through for me.

I had a strange sense of incongruity against "have been received entry" myself.
You proved my intuition was correct indeed.

Thanks, again.

J

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