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Anonymous
#512399 Sun, 11 May 08 12:27 PM
Would you please point out my errors. Thank you.
I got gift return for the cash gift to my nephew and niece for their school start. I gave them cash because they want to buy anything they want, and I received just half the price of department store coupon and some sweet. This might sounds ridiculous and inconvenient, but some people tale it rude if you do not pay back half the price of the gift you received. I hate this custom especially for the wedding. At wedding ceremony, you paid not a small amount of money and receive tons of return mostly heavy and unpleasant. In my closet, there are lots of wedding gift returns even with just low numbers of wedding ceremony.
Things getting changed to more simply and cost effectively little by little. Sometimes I feel funny because I feel you are rude because you are complaining you does not receive anything just because you give unnecessary things to someone.
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Mister Micawber
#512418 Sun, 11 May 08 01:19 PM
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I have underlined some problem areas:
I
got gift
return for the cash gift to my nephew and niece for their
school start
. I gave them cash because
they want to buy anything they want
, and I received just half the price
of department
store coupon and some
sweet
. This
might sounds
ridiculous and inconvenient, but some people
tale it rude
if you do not pay back half the price of the gift you received. I hate this
custom especially
for
the wedding
.
At wedding
ceremony, you
paid
not a small amount of money and receive
tons of return mostly heavy and unpleasant
. In my closet, there are lots of wedding gift returns
even with just low numbers of
wedding
ceremony
.
Things getting
changed to more
simply
and cost
effectively
little by little. Sometimes I feel funny because I feel
you
are rude because
you
are complaining
you does
not receive anything just because
you give
unnecessary things to someone.
Mister Micawber
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