increase in / the number of deaths

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Yoong Liat  #306863  Sun, 24 Dec 06 11:18 AM

The accident comes less than a month after the Traffic Police warned of an increase in the number of deaths of motorcyclists.

The accident comes less than a month after the Traffic Police warned of an increase in deaths of motorcyclists.

Which is the correct sentence?


 

  
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Anonymous  #306866  Sun, 24 Dec 06 11:38 AM
To me, both.
  
Marius Hancu  #306867  Sun, 24 Dec 06 11:40 AM
The first one is the logical one, however the 2nd is accepted, with death meaning number of deaths:

http://query.nytimes.com/search/query?query=%22increase+in+deaths%22+&srchst=nyt

I wouldn't use it though in careful righting.


  
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Inchoateknowledge  #306868  Sun, 24 Dec 06 11:43 AM
the frequency of either structure is on equal footing with the other.
  
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Yoong Liat  #306871  Sun, 24 Dec 06 11:48 AM
Thanks, Marius and Incho.
  
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