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Latest post Thu, Aug 17 2006 4:08 AM by Fizzi. 2 replies.
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Fizzi  +  256394 Wed, 16 Aug 06 12:04 PM

Would somebody please help me with my English?

1) Both research on information provided in pharmaceutical advertisements in medical journals and by pharmaceutical representatives have shown the low quality of information. These have created a need for doctors to critically analyze promotional information which may reduce the negative impact of promotion to doctors prescribing behaviour and patients’ health. However, no study has evaluated the skills of physicians in critically analyzing information in pharmaceutical promotion.

2) Another example of patients’ health is  at risk is when physicians are convinced to use new drugs with unproven health benefits which may lower the usage of older drugs that have been shown in clinical trials to improve health outcomes

 

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Dean
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nona the brit  +  256439 Wed, 16 Aug 06 03:23 PM

Haven't you already asked about these several times before?
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Fizzi  +  256693 Thu, 17 Aug 06 04:08 AM

Hi nona the brit,

After discussion with my supervisors, I have rephrased the sentences. I am not sure whether the new sentences are right. Please accept my deepest apologies if this is wrong.

Regards,

Dean
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