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Latest post Thu, Aug 10 2006 5:41 AM by Clive. 3 replies.
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Fizzi  +  254008 Wed, 09 Aug 06 01:14 PM

Would some body please comment my English?

Pharmaceutical promotion also plays a significant role in ensuring rational and safe use of medicines by providing doctors with high quality of information. The information provided by pharmaceutical companies is used by doctors as one of their sources of information, especially for newly-marketed drugs. However, studies have shown the low quality of information in pharmaceutical promotion.Greater reliance of this information will exposed doctors to the negative impact of promotion on their prescribing behaviour.


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Dean
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Clive  +  254223 Thu, 10 Aug 06 05:18 AM

Hi Dean,

Pharmaceutical promotion also plays a significant role in ensuring rational and safe use of medicines by providing doctors with high quality of information. The information provided by pharmaceutical companies is used by doctors as one of their sources of information, especially for newly-marketed drugs. However, studies have shown the low quality of information in pharmaceutical promotion.Greater reliance of this information will exposed doctors to the negative impact of promotion on their prescribing behaviour.

My comment is that this English is very good. I have high-lighted a few areas that you still need to correct.

Best wishes, Clive
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Fizzi  +  254229 Thu, 10 Aug 06 05:31 AM

Hi Clive,

Thaks for your help.I have made some changes.Would that be ok?

Pharmaceutical promotion also plays a significant role in ensuring rational and safe use of medicines by providing doctors
with high-quality information. The information provided by pharmaceutical companies is used by doctors as one of their sources of information, especially for newly-marketed drugs. However, studies have shown the low quality of information in pharmaceutical promotion.Greater reliance on this information will expose doctors to the negative impact of promotion on their prescribing behaviour.

Regards,
Dean
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Clive  +  254233 Thu, 10 Aug 06 05:41 AM

Hi,

Yes, it's fine now.

Clive
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