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How to make a good introduction at a buisness meeting with different partners working on a future product?

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benzzzz  #80597  Sat, 12 Mar 05 12:10 PM
Hello, I am a french student in grenoble and I have little problems with one of my group exam of the year. With two other students we have to "create" a meeting between the chairmen of NOKIA, Nokia's marketing official, Nokia's production director, and an official of a french telecommunication brand. The meeting topic is about the launching of a new kind of telephone on the mobile market, and we have to agree on the date we'll start selling this new product..
We have many ideas but we still don't know how to make a good introduction (made by nokia's boss) of the meeting.....
Thanks for helping us :-p
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Mister Micawber  #81028  Mon, 14 Mar 05 06:10 AM

Hello Ben. Welcome to English Forums.

It would be best if you would post your first draft of an introduction, so that we can take a look at the sort of problems you may have. Start with something like 'I'd like to welcome everyone to this meeting...' Introduce the members to each other, and state the goal of the meeting.

  
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matthewg  #83636  Thu, 24 Mar 05 10:12 PM
I've written quite a few marketing and PR proposals, and even when I was studying marketing, I'd always have given my proposal a title which summed up all my ideas, for example 'Bridging the Mobile Gap'. Start the introduction with what you would normally think of as the conclusion: a short and precise thesis statement.


What is a Thesis Statement?

Almost all of us—even if we don’t do it consciously—look early in an essay for a one- or two-sentence condensation of the argument or analysis that is to follow. We refer to that condensation as a thesis statement.

Why Should Your Essay Contain A Thesis Statement?

- to test your ideas by distilling them into a sentence or two;
- to better organize and develop your argument;
- to provide your reader with a “guide” to your argument.

In general, your thesis statement will accomplish these goals if you think of the thesis as the answer to the question your paper explores.

How Can You Write Good Thesis Statement?

Here are some helpful hints to get you started. You can either scroll down or select a link to a specific topic.

[Please follow this link for more] How to Write a Thesis Statement, Indiana University
  
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