Introduction business letter

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Can some one take a peak to this letter, englis is no my first lang. the business is a electrical contarctor based in charlotte, NC and Am trying to present my co. to the local general contractors. Thanks again.

Dear
Sir or Madam:

We would like to take this opportunity to briefly introduce our company Montes Electric, Inc. so that you may consider adding our company to your list of approved service providers.

Montes Electric, Inc. is a Licensed and Insured Electrical Contractor based in Charlotte and is engaged in a wide range of services in the construction field. Our services include wiring for: New Construction, Remodels, Custom Houses and Additions. Established in 2009, our company is committed to maintain or exceed standards
that are demanded by the best companies in the construction field. We believe in profitable, sustainable and enjoyable long-term relationships with employees, customers and suppliers.

Please do not hesitate to request a quote for your upcoming projects; we promise you, we will give you a very competitive price, If you have any questions or concerns please contact me at 704-615-810.

Thank you very much for considering our request.

Sincerely

Cesar Montesdeoca

704-615-8180

www.monteselectricinc.com
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Can some one take a peek at this letter; English is not my first language. The business is a electrical contractor based in Charlotte, NC and I am trying to present my Co. to the local general contractors. Thanks again.

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Dear Sir or Madam: We would like to take this opportunity to briefly introduce our company, Montes Electric, Inc. so that you may consider adding our company us to your list of approved service providers. Montes Electric, Inc. is a licensed and insured electrical contractor based in Charlotte and is engaged in a wide range of services in the construction field. Our services include wiring for new construction, remodels, custom houses and additions. Established in 2009, our company is committed to maintain equal or exceed standards that are demanded by the best companies in the business.construction field. We believe in profitable, sustainable and enjoyable long-term relationships with employees, customers and suppliers.

Please do not hesitate to request a quote for your upcoming projects; we promise you, we will give you a very competitive price. If you have any questions or concerns, please contact me at 704-615-810.

Thank you very much for considering our request.
Sincerely,
Cesar Montesdeoca
704-615-8180
www.monteselectricinc.com
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thanks a lot

Cesar M.
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Hi

Thanks for your help.

Here i got a first look of theintro letter, I corrected as you suggest and also made some additions, can you please take a peek at it.

Dear Sir or Madam:

We would like to take this opportunity to briefly introduce our company, Montes Electric,
Inc. so that you may consider adding us
to your list of approved service providers. Montes Electric,
Inc. is a licensed
and insured
electrical
contractor
based in Charlotte and is engaged in a
wide range of services in the construction field. Our services include but are
not limited to: wiring for new construction, remodels, custom houses,
additions, commercial buildings and more.

Established in 2009, our company is committed to equal or exceed standards that are
demanded by the best companies in the business. We believe in profitable,
sustainable and enjoyable long-term relationships with employees, customers and
suppliers.

It would be my pleasure to provide you with proposals for any upcoming projects
with “fit” into our range of expertise. I feel that we can offer your clients
quality work at competitive pricing.

Thank you very much for considering our request.

Sincerely,

Cesar Montesdeoca

Ph. 704-615-8180

Fax.7014-525-1361

www.monteselectricinc.com

thanks

Cesar M.
AnonymousIt would be my pleasure to provide you with proposals for any upcoming projects
with “fit” into our range of expertise. I feel that we can offer your clients
quality work at competitive pricing.
It would be my pleasure to provide you with proposals for any upcoming projects
which fit our range of expertise. I am confident that we can offer your clients
quality work at competitive pricing. (Having just remodeled my home, I would also like a contractor who is reliable and gets the job done on schedule.)
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Anonymous:
Thanks so much for your help

Cesar M.
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