can someone check my paragraph??
Decision-making is common processes in companies.
Every manager has to announce new decisions in order to achieve company [objectives/goals].
Actually, to achieve the [objectives/goals], managers need supports or
evidences to [assist/help] them make better decisions. Turban (2007) says, Business
Intelligence (BI) collects and analyses historical data to generate models or reports
in order to [assist/help] decision makers to decide appropriate decisions. Therefore,
Yates says “…The quality of those decisions can be no better than the quality
of the judgments supporting them”. This essay will evaluate the benefits of
BI for decision-making process in terms to [enhance/improve] the
decision-making process, provide appropriate models to make better decisions
and forecasting.