Is the translation correct?

Tyoma

Hello! I'm translating a page of our corporate website from Russian into English. Could you please tell me if there are  any grammatical mistakes in the text below? If something doesn't sound natural, please let me know either :-)

IGNITION is an automobile magazine, which means our audience is [for anyone/all those] interested in modern cars and everything concerned with them. At that it's not just interested. A substantial part of our visitors [Many who visit the site] are potential buyers of new vehicles. The other substantial part of our [Other]visitors are car owners, who (as is well known) are far more potential buyers of new vehicles. The audience of IGNITION is more than a million people a month. It's more than a drawing of the majority of [all the subscribers to] well-known paper automobile magazines taken together.

We take orders for placing graphical advertisement on the pages of are looking for advertisers who wish to be included in our magazine , with special positioning on the cover. and (in less quantities) on its cover. Since we are based in Russia and our magazine is in Russian language the prices are in Russian rubles (VAT exclusive) with a minimum charge of 28, 000 rubles. We offer discounts to our regular customers. And to advertising agencies too.and to advertising agencies.

 

Tyoma

Hello Feebs! Thank you very much for your answear. It is really very useful for me.

At the moment I'm working on the next part of the page, which is about our requirements relating to graphical banners. And I have the same questions. Is my translation correct? Does it sound natural?

Banner Requirements

File formats: GIF and FLASH

Dimensions	Max Size
480×90 240×180	20KB
240×400 480×180	30KB
100%×60	40KB

Those banners which don’t have borders look more beautiful and those which are not animated look even better (besides, they work better).
Banners cannot contain annoying animation, grammatical and orthographic mistakes. They also must comply with Russian legislation.
The link for FLASH banners should be written in the on-release handler (on (release) { }) as follows: getURL(banner_href, "_blank"); so that our system can count the clicks correctly. In that way, after clicking on the banner the link will be opened in a new window.
It’s a button which should be an object for the handler. Your attention is drawn to the absence of inverted commas in the first parameter. This is very important. To do so, you should switch the entry field into the expression mode (‘=’). Here’s the explicative picture (Macromedia FLASH MX):
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When publishing or exporting a banner, install FLASH-player 6 or lower and ActionScript 1.0.