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Creativeguru

#514761 Sat, 17 May 08 10:42 AM

A necklace and a pendant with every Balmain WatchAnd a necklace if you don’t purchase..surprised !!

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Mister Micawber

#514910 Sat, 17 May 08 04:38 PM

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A necklace and a pendant with every Balmain Watch. And — surprise!— a necklace if you don’t purchase anything.

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