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Latest post Fri, Oct 10 2008 10:49 PM by Tuongvan. 2 replies.
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Tuongvan  +  575172 Fri, 10 Oct 08 03:17 PM
Hi teachers,

Could you possibly help me by correcting these sentences if they do not dound natural to native speakers?:

It is better to accept sadness now than to hope for something impossible and much later discover/ find  that the things you hope for /have been hoping for never happen.

You would rather accept sadness now than to hope for something impossible and much later discover/ find  that the things you hope for /have been hoping for never happen.

Thank you in advance
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caris  +  575278 Fri, 10 Oct 08 10:24 PM
It is better to accept sadness now rather than to hope for something impossible and much later discover that the things you have been hoping for never happened.
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Tuongvan  +  575287 Fri, 10 Oct 08 10:49 PM
Thank you Caris,but how about if I say as follows:

a/ It is better to accept sadness now than ( not "rather than") to hope for something impossible and much later discover that the things you have been hoping for never happened.

b/ You would rather accept sadness now than to hope for something impossible and much later discover/ find out  that the things you have been hoping for never happened.

Best wishes
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