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New2grammar  #546643  Sat, 26 Jul 08 02:24 PM
A: Hi, I'm calling to see if you carry kayak.
B: Yes, we do.
A: How many types of karaks do you have?
B: We have three different models of 2 seater plastic kayaks.
A: How much do they cost?
B: The prices range from five hundred to two thousand dollars depending on the model.

Could you please make the conversation natural?
Thanks.
  
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Yankee  #546651  Sat, 26 Jul 08 02:36 PM
Hi N2G

Just a couple of comments:

- A: Hi, I'm calling to see if you carry kayaks.
- A: How many types of karaks do you have? => I would suggest that people normally don't want to know "how many" but rather either "what kind" or whether the company carries a specific type or brand.
  
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New2grammar  #546653  Sat, 26 Jul 08 02:43 PM
Thanks, Yankee.I agree with you. One last question, should it be "What kind of kayaks/What kindS of kayaks do you carry?"
  
Yankee  #546655  Sat, 26 Jul 08 02:47 PM
I'd probably go with "what kinds of kayaks".
  
New2grammar  #546656  Sat, 26 Jul 08 02:49 PM
Thank you, Yankee.
  
Grammar Geek  #546706  Sat, 26 Jul 08 05:21 PM
 I would suggest that if you asked "what kind" you are asking "which brand."

 

  
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New2grammar  #546709  Sat, 26 Jul 08 05:29 PM
GG, are you saying the singular "what kind" suggests brand while what kinds suggests builts ie: two seater, plastic, wooden?
  
Grammar Geek  #546719  Sat, 26 Jul 08 05:50 PM
 Well, you asked to make it natural, right?

As someone who used to kayak a great deal, I would assume, if you carry kayaks at all, that you carry single-person seak kayays, maybe double sea kayaks, white-water kayaks, and probably those little sit-a-top fool-around-on-the-water kayaks. But if I've done my research about what type of kayak I want to buy, at this point, if I said "what kind" I am probably thinking which brand.

A more natural question would be "do you carry double (or tandem) kayaks?"

  
New2grammar  #546724  Sat, 26 Jul 08 05:57 PM
I see your point now, GG. I just want to confirm. Which is better, what kind of kayak/kayakS?
  
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