Kindly please check the grammar

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Maple  #487011  Mon, 10 Mar 08 02:47 PM

TCM remedys for the stomach pain has a long history, copious experience, unique methodology, a positive curative effect and a distinctive system. But at the same time, there exist some problems, e.g. the chaos of the names of the disorders, the uncertainty of the denotations and connotations of these disorders.

 

Are the above sentences grammatical and idiomatic?

 

Many thanks in advance1

  
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Mister Micawber  #488697  Fri, 14 Mar 08 03:11 AM
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TCM remedy for stomach painhas a long history, a unique system, and a positivecurative effect. However, at the same time there are some problems, e.g. the chaotic names and theuncertain denotations and connotations of these disorders.

  
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Maple  #488708  Fri, 14 Mar 08 03:44 AM

Mr M,

Thanks a lot for this precious polish you gave on my sentences. It's extremely helpful!

 

Best regards!

Maple

 

 

  
Mister Micawber  #488742  Fri, 14 Mar 08 05:41 AM
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Sorry about the lack of spaces between some words, Maple.  When you post in that format you are using, and I copy-and-paste, the spacing problems do not appear until after I post... and I often don't wait around to proofread.

  
Maple  #488793  Fri, 14 Mar 08 09:23 AM

Hi, Mr M, the lack of spaces doesn't bother me in the least; I can see your point, and by comparing yours with my own sentences, I've got the valuable information I was seeking. While in the light of you Sir's concern about the correctness of information, I feel obliged  to say sorry for my typo of 1 for ! in my first post.   

 

Thanks again and Best Regards!

 

  
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