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Anonymous  #473326  Wed, 06 Feb 08 07:27 AM

We are changing to lead the growth, which we are witnessing at the blitzkrieg pace.  As the saying goes, ‘Change is constant’, for us its not just the saying but a benchmark of success. We are changing to provide you with better lives for tomorrow. We are committed and determined towards the quality of products that fill your lives with happiness, and that’s the only thing which won’t change ever.   

 

 

  
Marius Hancu  #473370  Wed, 06 Feb 08 09:42 AM
blitzkrieg

It would be totally ill-advised to use this term with so many bad historical connotations in an ad.

  
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Anonymous  #473376  Wed, 06 Feb 08 09:59 AM
Kindly rephrase it with proper connotations, its not ad, it's an article please help me to improve upon my writing skills
  
Anonymous  #473383  Wed, 06 Feb 08 10:35 AM

won't ever change

it's - it is (I think it was on line 2)

As the saying goes:  "Change is constant". For us  it's .....  or As the saying goes, "Change is constant"; for us it's not ..

which won't ever change.

  
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