Kindly check my para on Hockey

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Creativeguru

#515425 Mon, 19 May 08 05:37 AM

India didn’t lose yesterday. Indeed India won the Silver Medal with pride. It was the junior team who represented India in Azlan Shah Hockey tournament and being in final is itself a great achievement for the team. The final had all the components which a final should have – exciting, energetic, enthusiastic and keenly fought contest. Players gave their 100%, Argentina was lucky to get a golden goal in the extra time. Anyways three cheers for Indian Hockey team.

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Mister Micawber

#515592 Mon, 19 May 08 01:13 PM

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I have underlined some problems:

India didn’t lose yesterday. Indeed, India won the Silver Medal with pride. It was the junior team who represented India in Azlan Shah Hockey Tournament and being in final is itself a great achievement for the team. The final had all the components which a final should have – exciting, energetic, enthusiastic and keenly fought contest. Players gave their 100%, Argentina was lucky to get a golden goal in the extra time. Anyways three cheers for Indian hockey team.

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Creativeguru

#515597 Mon, 19 May 08 01:23 PM

My did my best to rectify the errors:

India didn’t lose yesterday. Indeed, India won the Silver Medal with pride. It was the junior team who represented India at Azlan Shah Hockey Tournament and being in the final is itself a great achievement for the team. The final had all the components which a final should have – excitement, energetic, enthusiastic and keenly fought contest. The players had given there 100%, Argentina was lucky to get a golden goal in an extra time. Three cheers for the Indian hockey team.

Creativeguru