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Creativeguru  #510738  Wed, 07 May 08 10:30 AM

Women - Kitchen expert knows the better

 

Who understands woman better than a woman?

 

Only a woman knows woman’s needs

  

Some things are better left to women to decide

 Only the expert can look beyond the detail A beautiful kitchen is the heart of every home 

Everything you need!

 

We make it the way you want it

 

 

 
  
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Feebs11  #510762  Wed, 07 May 08 12:07 PM

Creativeguru

Women - Kitchen expert knows the better  Women: the kitchen experts who know best

 

Who understands women/a woman better than a woman?


Only a woman knows a woman’s needs

  

Some things are better left to women to decide Right on! Smile

 Only the expert can see beyond the detail.

A beautiful kitchen is the heart of any home.  

Everything you need!  As a strapline, ok

 

We make it the way you want it    ok

 

 

 

 
  
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Creativeguru  #510908  Wed, 07 May 08 06:32 PM

Thanks Feeb, I commit so many silly mistakes only 2 out of 8 are correct
  
Feebs11  #510950  Wed, 07 May 08 08:54 PM
 3 out of 8   Happy

 

They are not bad - just needed tweaking.  
  
Creativeguru  #511072  Thu, 08 May 08 05:22 AM

Thanks Feeb to tell me it's three rather than two out of eight. I think i need to brush up my maths also  Smile
  
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