Kindly check my para on terrorism attack

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Creativeguru  #513494  Wed, 14 May 08 11:20 AM

Terrorism raised its ugly head again, this time  in the pink city of India, Jaipur. At the last count 60 people were killed and over 150 injured. Terrorists struck with precision, bombs were planted in bicycles and within 12 minutes, eight bombs went off at different locations of the city. It created chaos among the crowd, all started running for the safer places, jumping over the dead bodies, severed limbs, and the scene was horrible and terrifying.

  
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Mister Micawber  #513506  Wed, 14 May 08 12:02 PM
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Terrorism raised its ugly head again, this time in the pink city of India, Jaipur. At the last count, 60 people were killed and over 150 injured. Terrorists struck with precision: bombs were planted on bicycles, and within 12 minutes, eight bombs went off at different locations in the city, creating chaos among the crowds.  Many started running for safety, jumping over dead bodies and severed limbs.  The scene was terrifying.
  
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Creativeguru  #513512  Wed, 14 May 08 12:10 PM

Thanks sir I committed mistakes but lesser then earlier

  
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