Kindly check sentences

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Creativeguru  #512021  Sat, 10 May 08 11:08 AM

Kindly check the sentences and if require please rephrase it:

 

2.       Ever since the 90s, Marathon has begun to expand to cover the rest of Mumbai and beyond.

3.       Their collective experience of over 80 years in the industry leads the Group forward into the future.

4.       Customer delight is our dharma, our reason to be or customer’s delight is our dharma, our reason to be.

5.       We anticipate our customers’ needs, expose them to better opportunities

  
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Mister Micawber  #512229  Sun, 11 May 08 01:03 AM
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2.       Ever since the 90s, Marathon has been expanding to cover the rest of Mumbai and beyond.

3.       Their collective experience of over 80 years in the industry is guiding the group forward into the future.

4.       Customer delight is our dharma, our reason to be.

5.       We anticipate our customers’ needs, offering them better opportunities.


  
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Creativeguru  #512294  Sun, 11 May 08 07:01 AM

Thanks a lot sir

  
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