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Creativeguru  #513113  Tue, 13 May 08 01:30 PM
Presenting an offer that will add more charm to your elegance, you will get a Motomo necklace and a Mottomo pendant with the purchase of a watch. Impress that special some one in your life by gifting her exquisite jewellery.

Just walk into any of our outlets and you will get a necklace anyhow you can still impress that someone special

 

 

I want to communicate that if you will buy the jewellery you will get a necklace and pendant and if you didn’t buy you will still get the necklace so just walk in to our outlets how to put it please help

 

  
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Mister Micawber  #513347  Wed, 14 May 08 01:21 AM
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Add more charm to your elegance.  You will receive a Motomo necklace and a Mottomo pendant when you purchase a watch — and a Mottomo necklace if you do not!  Impress that special someone in your life by giving her exquisite jewellery.  Just walk into any of our outlets.
  
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Creativeguru  #513423  Wed, 14 May 08 06:10 AM

Thanks a lot sir for your help

  
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