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Creativeguru  #523251  Thu, 05 Jun 08 07:48 AM

We have the limited edition of 88 pieces only, so be the one to own it before it vanishes.

Is there any better way to write it in more sophisticated language?

  
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Mister Micawber  #523252  Thu, 05 Jun 08 07:53 AM
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This is a limited edition of 88.  Own one before they sell out.

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Creativeguru  #523255  Thu, 05 Jun 08 08:02 AM

for better understanding I am posting whole paragraph here :

 

Disney, the creator of magic world wide and Popley, the leading house of elegant and stylish jewellery are delighted, to announce the launch of ‘Disney Fine Jewellery’ in India and the Middle East. This is an exclusive invitation to our loyal customers for this special launch event. 

We have the limited edition of 88 pieces only, so be the one to own it before it vanishes. Come and seize the opportunity to own a legacy of exceptional craftsmanship, a marvelous creation that will make your eyes sparkle like diamonds.

 

The line sentence in discusion is the bold one . 

 

  
Mister Micawber  #523266  Thu, 05 Jun 08 08:43 AM
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I'll stick with my original paraphrase.
  
Creativeguru  #523268  Thu, 05 Jun 08 08:45 AM

Thank you sir

  
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