Kindly help me with perfect grammar if any errors

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Anonymous  #470049  Tue, 29 Jan 08 07:12 AM
Give other a taste of your elite lifestyle. Think elite…. Live elite…. Feel elite….this is our motive behind crafting these unique eye catching masterpieces. Elegantly designed to meet your current day trends & specially created to suit your elite lifestyle. Last but not the least, aimed at giving others a taste of your elite lifestyle.
  
Doll  #470149  Tue, 29 Jan 08 01:47 PM

My try: 

Give others a taste of your elite lifestyle. Think elitely…. Live elitely…. Feel elitely….This is our motive behind crafting these unique eye-catching masterpieces. Elegantly designed to meet your current day trends & specially created to suit your elite lifestyle. Last but not the least, aimed at giving others a taste of your elite lifestyle.

  
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