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Anonymous  #472873  Tue, 05 Feb 08 08:43 AM

We are at the threshold of achieving our objectives, which we earn marked for ourselves a year ago. ‘Change is constant’ as saying goes and we firmly believe that, change emerges from the progressive growth. We are determined and committed toward the wealth maximization of our share holders & all those who have stake in our organisation. ‘Innovation’ is one of the key components that drive our growth. Behind the wheel of this surging ‘growth’ bandwagon is our team of experts. Our new products in the market are throne for our competitor’s growth. At last I would like to thank all of you for fuelling this growth with your enthusiasm. Let’s keep fire burning in our belly till we achieve our vision and beyond.           

  
Mister Micawber  #472917  Tue, 05 Feb 08 10:57 AM

We are at the threshold of achieving the objectives that we earmarked for ourselves a year ago. ‘Change is constant’ as the saying goes, and we firmly believe that change emerges from growth. We are committed to the wealth maximization of our shareholders and other stakeholders. ‘Innovation’ is one of the key components that drive our growth. Behind the wheel of this surging ‘growth’ bandwagon is our team of experts. Our new products in the market are throne for our competitor’s growth. (I have no idea what the underlined means) I would like to thank all of you for fuelling this growth with your enthusiasm. Let’s keep the fire in our belly till we achieve our vision and beyond. 

   

  
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