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Kindly suggest correct sentence
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Creativeguru  #476776  Thu, 14 Feb 08 09:26 AM
Is the following sentence makes sense, I just want to communicate that pearl jewellery is excellent to wear and perfect for gifting. Freshwater Pearl jewellery is simply exquisite to wear and make excellent luxurious gift
  
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Feebs11  #476801  Thu, 14 Feb 08 10:52 AM
It reads awkwardly to me. I would rewrite it:

Exquisite "Freshwater Pearl" jewellery, perfect for wearing, makes an excellent gift. OR "a gift of luxury".
  
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