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Creativeguru  #476729  Thu, 14 Feb 08 06:02 AM
Democracy is Buy the people Far the people Off the people Our politicians are experts in earning Name, fame but without shame Indeed our citizens don’t believe to cast the vote but vote the caste Our heart says ‘peace of society’ to prevail but our mind say pieces of human in the name of religion again invoked by the so call guardians of the democracy our politicians Where are we heading?
  
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Avangi  #476744  Thu, 14 Feb 08 06:44 AM
Creative indeed!  I'm willing to charge any punctuation errors to poetic license.  And I'm sure Abe won't mind any liberties you've taken with his work, since it's now in public domain.  I have no wish to damage your poetry.

Best wishes,  - A.
  
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