Kindly please help me write this letter nicely

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Anonymous  #574510  Wed, 08 Oct 08 06:13 PM
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Hi,

I would like to ask for some help on my letter. It is a formal letter to HR person. Thank you very much in advance!

Here it goes:

Dear Ms. Brown,

at the end of last week I sent to you an email to inform you that Ms. Smith had not contacted me so far. Because I have not received any response from you as yet, I am not sure if you have got my correspondence. I also would like to know if I am considered as a candidate to fulfill the position of Customer Service Representative in your Company.

Please, reply to my letters at your earliest convenience. I look forward to hearing from you.

Kind regards,

  
RayH  #574518  Wed, 08 Oct 08 06:26 PM
Dear Ms. Brown,

At the end of last week I sent to you an email to inform you that Ms. Smith had not yet contacted me so far. Because I have not received any response from you as yet, I am not sure if you have got received my correspondence. I also would like to know if I am considered as a candidate to fulfill the position of Customer Service Representative in your Company.

Please, reply to my letters at your earliest convenience. I look forward to hearing from you.

  
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Anonymous  #574523  Wed, 08 Oct 08 06:59 PM
Thank you very much RayH :)
Best wishes,
Maria
  
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